After looking back at my storyboard and talking to Miss Elliott about it i believe that it is too much like an opening sequence so i will need to make it more short and snappy. I was also thinking about showing the first section of the final scene and them coming back to it at the end. This is to draw the attention of the viewer into the trailer. As the viewer knows that there is something wrong, then they will try and work it out as the trailer goes on which well help keep them focused on what is happening.
After researching into how to publish better documents, I found a website called ISSUU which makes publications look professional. This is my first draft storyboard in a book effect.
After looking at my storyboard and getting peoples opinions on my ideas, I have re-arranged my storyboard. Most people thought that the idea was more like an opening sequence rather than a trailer so I cut down the shots and put a returning scene in so that it looks more like a trailer. Most of the shots that are lost or shots from inside the car in the forest, however I have made up on the lost footage by adding the retuning scene of the train tracks. I have then taken my storyboard and created it on a publisher document and then uploaded the storyboard up to ISSUU.
Image would not upload so will add this on when possible.
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